Writing 201 – Poem Animal
Day 4 of Writing 201 – Poetry challenge
Dear Reader
Day 4 of this enjoyable challenge brings us to animals. I took time over this one, mainly because of the animal to chose.
I must admit I am not sure of this poem, maybe not the best but it’s something I will put forward.
Enjoy (comments well)
Day 4 – The Kill
A stealthy approach is his key
Slowly he moves, so the pray wont flee.
Crouching low, eyes never leaving
Using his senses, always feeling.
A momentary stop, frozen in time,
As his pray looks around all in his prime.
Has he been spotted, is this his mistake,
His goes unnoticed the pray still to take.
Without a sound he knows they will move
He is the leader, who has to prove.
He shall provide, for all in his care
He will be the one, the one who dares.
With military precision they move at a glance
He waits one last heartbeat ready with every ounce.
The pack descends, cries moving the pray,
He waits just that second, for one to stray.
At the beating of hearts, moving with grace,
He tracks the one, covering at pace.
Eyes burning, teeth gleaming bright,
Pounding of blood, his feeling just right.
In seconds he has it, a huge beast in flight
But the Wolf has his needs and ruthless might.
His has the kill, his pray and his pride
He howls his prowess deep into the night.

6 thoughts on “Writing 201 – Poem Animal”
Good poem. You had us following the lion.
Thank you – I thought of how the animal would hunt
This is really nice ☺. .. I was drawn in, felt like I was watching the animal hunt its prey
Thank you, I am glad it work
Sometimes my spelling mistakes work in my favour. After reading it myself I decided to keep it in.Odd that it works. Thank you.